Anyone following this blog who's working on the h0le project, there's a specific blog set up for it now and I'll be uploading any updates to that one for people to use as reference. Should be easier than trawling through this one at any rate.
You can find it here.
Monday, 30 January 2012
Monday, 16 January 2012
h0le: animatic
After getting some a second opinion from Kathy and Derek, I redrew the middle section of the animatic to try and change the pacing slightly. Mainly I sped it up as much as possible to make it seem a little more frenetic.
Apart from that, I removed a fade early on to keep it closer to a 3 act structure and tried to emphasise the part where he nearly falls off to make it more serious. I added in a reaction to his hand injuries as well after I realised that from the animatic he doesn't have much of a variety of facial expressions beyond slightly bored to terrified, so a depressed one seemed necessary.
Apart from that, I removed a fade early on to keep it closer to a 3 act structure and tried to emphasise the part where he nearly falls off to make it more serious. I added in a reaction to his hand injuries as well after I realised that from the animatic he doesn't have much of a variety of facial expressions beyond slightly bored to terrified, so a depressed one seemed necessary.
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